Freshening up some jokes

I’ve been making a few attempts on some comics lately.

The drawings has been pretty decent, I think, but the jokes has felt a bit off.

Mostly because I’ve been drawing it all not knowing what jokes to crack at the end.

So I’ve basically ended up with a complete drawing every time, and then have to find some joke to suite them.

Anyway, I did an attempt to freshen up a few of them the other day.

Just trying to give them a bit more edge.

Some of them included a little twist on the drawings as well.

You can see the changes below. The old jokes to the left and the new ones to the right.

How do you think they turned out? Is there any improvement?

6 thoughts on “Freshening up some jokes

      1. Maybe Iโ€™m too old to give a judgement, the second one made me think instead of appreciating the drawing and simple quote. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I would love it if you left me a few words