I’ve been making a few attempts on some comics lately.
The drawings has been pretty decent, I think, but the jokes has felt a bit off.
Mostly because I’ve been drawing it all not knowing what jokes to crack at the end.
So I’ve basically ended up with a complete drawing every time, and then have to find some joke to suite them.
Anyway, I did an attempt to freshen up a few of them the other day.
Just trying to give them a bit more edge.
Some of them included a little twist on the drawings as well.
You can see the changes below. The old jokes to the left and the new ones to the right.
How do you think they turned out? Is there any improvement?
By the window
Magic shield
On the light post
Angry crowd
In the field
The cows
Didn’t eat the paper
Dr. W. Oof
I certainly do tend to overthink most things in life ☺
Personally I prefer your first set of jokes on the left 👍
Huh, well that gave me something to think about.. ☺ I thought the first ones were a bit dull..
Maybe I’m too old to give a judgement, the second one made me think instead of appreciating the drawing and simple quote. 😉
Not at all! ☺☺ I really appreciate the feedback. Maybe I shouldn’t feel that bad about the first ones, then ☺
Maybe it’s a bit of overthinking! You need to ask a cartoon expert 😊